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Comet Avataar

An enigmatic, intense long poem about the various ramifications of Coronavirus, by Prof. Sonjoy, an exclusive for Different Truths.

We scared the fox out of his lair
We sent the porcupine scurrying from our fire
We danced around nature’s pyre
Reduced tracts of land to a wasted mire.

The trees crashed to the whirr of the saw, sliced, neatly logged
The perfume of flowers in the thick yellow air, smogged
And a concrete jungle loomed its shadows
Over a raped, mutilated earth,
Writhing in her death throes.

Somewhere in the dark cosmic infinitude
In deep silent solitude
A comet with flaming tail waited
As revered prophets had long back predicted
Waited, deciding the form it would choose
The time to descend
Let pandemonium loose.

From the erratic flight of the flitting bat
In eerie misty moonlight
To vampire into the bloodstream
To mutate into a microcomet
Commetting, plummeting, mucussing its ways
Down alleys of fresh airways
Blocking polluting snuffing
The coughing sneezing life out, wheezing
Creating a major traffic snarl.

Making the huge unwieldy populace
Go scurrying crashing tumbling
Home into concrete havens,
soap suds and masks of anonymity
Vain citadels that are not walled
To block out, contain the calamity
Of a comet microbe that could virus its way
Into the deepest recesses
Quickly, silently, unperceived.

Gates clanking shut, doors padlocked
“No Entry” written large all around
And everywhere.
Empty the Highways,
The arteries blocked,
Clueless the police, islanded stranded.
All roads point to the white coated corridors
Ambulanced,ventilated, masked,
Pathologically swabbed.

Vehicles garaged, factories shut,
No smoke, no fumes, no spills, no haze,
No chemicals foaming the frothy river,
No oil glazes the ocean face
No smoke spirals the skylight ways.

In slow motion nature quietly returns
Reassumes forms, prehuman, pristine.
Gingerly, the Nilgai struts the highway
A swamp deer swings an antler
As warning to a barking stray.
In the moonlight the stealthy fox
Lightfooted skips, into a trot
A peacock perches on a chimney top slot
Blue azure auburn and gold.
The sumbmarine turtle’s periscope head
moves on the waters of the shimmering pond.
Fish shoals swirl, sparrows chirrup,
The swallow returns in spiralling arcs.
Tree roots dig, seal the earth’s scars
As it heals to the dance of the light green leaves
Young and tender in the waltzing breeze.

Has the Avataar finally arrived
Its hour come around at last
Tandaving madly in our respiratory tracts
In apocalyptic calypso its price extracts
Combusting the spoils of a rotting Yuga
Scattering, blowing, sucking
Into the  Black Hole the ashes propelling?

A Prayer:

Destroyer Preserver Creator
Lead the wayward, homing soul
Back to its inheritance, its truest goal!
Teach us to live
As birds live, as trees,
As fish live, as bees
As live the pride of Lions
And the regal frugal tiger
In the grass, in the swamps
In the lush green leaves.
High up in the mountain, in the Deodar tops
The flying squirrel, from a branch
To another hops.
Teach us the hornbill’s and woodpecker’s way
As from Jamun to Mahua to Sal they sway
Teach us the belling of the Sambar stag, the Kakar’s bark
The eerie chill of a Hyena’s laugh,
Echoing in the forest’s dark.
Reconcile us back to our truest nature
Ensconced in the lap of mother Nature.

When you danced your dance of destruction
O Nataraj
Your tight snaking locks loosened
Releasing Ganga’s descending way
And in the frenzy of her freedom’s sway
She swirled in a cataract, swiftly whirling
Dancing, careening,whirlpooling.
While high up in the Himalayas,
The phallic glaciers melt
In rhythm with the annual cyclical passions
Of a Hermit God gone mad.
And the daughter of the Mountains
Widens her banks
To meet the swelling demands
Of the torrent rushing
Through the mangrove forests of her triangular Delta
Gushing
To a salty frothy consummation.
Earth springs to life,
To the rhythm of the tidal waves
The silting of the sandy banks,

A prayer goes up in unison
From Flora Fauna and Man
In a glorious dance of harmony

“Teach us to move to the rhythmic beat
Of the pulse of the earth in symphony”.

End Note:

Avataars will come, Avataars will go
Man is mankind’s biggest foe
In Epic wars and Pandemics
In Chernobyls and Epidemics
Many a lesson can be learnt
Which in peace, prosperity
Is soon unlearnt.

SO

Man is mankind’s biggest foe
Avataars will come, Avataars will go.

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Prof. Sonjoy Dutta-Roy
Sonjoy Dutta-Roy, Professor, Department of English, University of Allahabad, has published three volumes of Poetry. The Absent Words was published by Writers Workshop Kolkata in 1998, followed by Into Grander Space again from Writers Workshop in 2005, followed by Diary Poems and Story Tellers Rhymes by Author House Bloomington, USA in 2012. He is involved with Theatre and has Directed several plays and acted in many including Karnad's Hayavadana, Elkunchwar's Autobiography, Mohan Rakesh's One Day in Aashad and Aadhe Adhure, Tagore's Dak Ghar and Dattani's Tara, among many others.
17 Comments Text
  • Good Morning Sir..
    I am in complete awe of the emotional rhythm reverberating in all of us that you have captured in this poem..
    The narrative with its succeeding premonition of knell gave goosebumps with each passing line making us yield in complete surrender to the doom’s day dance of the Almighty..

  • This poem seems to be Poet’s urge to humanity to now atleast learn a lesson from the pandemic declaring man to be mankind’s foe. The poem has helplessness of the world portrayed through poet that though we may repent at a such a time but in good times the moral of the pandemic will be unlearnt which is so rightly expressed. It’s an awesome piece of art symbolising the present scenario.

  • Great . Beautifully crafted . Pray that mankind learn from this crises and do bit by bit to make this beautiful world sustainably livable .

  • This is such a wonderful piece! It evinces a brilliant philosophical argument within an evocative poetic frame. The metre and rhyme keep beat to the soundness of the arguments and in every line, one comes home to experiential truth of the times. Just loved this take on the omnipotent virus that derives its omnipotence from our collective existential folly!

  • I chanted this aloud and could aurally feel the healing reverberations of the words. The images, too, had the effect of a cleansing meditation. This is about more than corona. It is an ode to the lost sanity of our world today.

  • Enthralled by the charming spell of the poem COMET AVATAR. The poet has wonderfully evoked the sense of the impending doom through his re-creation of the environ of the Corona induced Apocalypse. As if Providence in the shape of Nataraaj — Indian ethos — or in the guise of the strange beast Yeats spoke of in “Second Coming” is afoot to take revenge on Man for his insensate excesses and now striking the rorund pkanet flat. Extra-terrstrial Comet the Corona truly is ramming into human body with invisible fellness of fatality. In doing so the poet has wonderfully alchemised Dante and Baudelaire, Arnold, Eliot, Yeats, Owen and the burly autocthon of a Whitman. Auden is also not left behind. But finally the synthesis resolves in the wonderful canticle of an Upanushadic Hymn — Prayer for regeneration !!! Kudos to the poet’s double feat — knowledge of lores across axes and at once raising an emotionally charged poem which is truly romantic in its mauve imaginative sensibility!

  • Dear Sonjoy
    Your ‘after a long time’ poem seems to have burst forth with all the pent up feelings that have simmered within you for so long. What better subject than the one that holds the entire world in a vice like grip, chocking the very breath of man. Your choice of imagery, your knitting of myth and reality, your appeal to the cosmic forces in a universal prayer and the thread of karmic inevitability that mankind faces for his hubris today, make your poem a masterpiece.
    All the best to you
    Amrita

    • Chidananda…I had posted a thank you comment for your response but it seems to have got lost in cyber space….overwhelming..
      Your response…
      .I am trying to individually thank everyone but the link is not always working…so thank you Amrita Shubhi and Tooba. Your responses are of intense value for me

  • Relished every bit of the poem! It is a riveting blend of reproof and caution. A compelling meditation on the ultimate oneness of all creation and the infallible law of karma, in the light of the present state of mankind. Every image and every metaphor flowing into one another spoke a thousand truths. Thank you for sharing, sir! Looking forward to more!

    • The poem is so musical, replete with images that are both beautifully bewitching and terrifying at the same time, like the Lord himself whose Tandav encompasses both Shringar and Raudra rasas! It was such a delight reading.

  • Such haunting imagery!
    “a concrete jungle loomed it’s shadows over a raped, mutilated earth,
    Writhing in her death throes”.
    Goosebumps!
    So much so that I heaved a sigh of relief when I read
    “In slow motion, nature quietly returns
    Reassumes forms, prehuman, pristine.”
    Even though humans are suffering.. But as the poem rightly pointed out.. Nature deserves the rest. The revenge, if I may say.
    Beautiful is an understatement for this piece of writing. Read it multiple times!!

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